Besides believing your article is very well written, I am really interested in participating in the FIFA tournament. Your catchy article and the propaganda generated from your article makes me eager to participate in the event. In my point of view, the best thing you did while writing the article is persuading the audience of this unique tournament, since more than 70% of teen boys play FIFA but aren´t used to playing in tournaments since they are very rare. Besides the magnitude of the tournament and the price money will for sure make people start practicing their skills online. The tournament is going to be a success, as your intention of catching the eye of the audience did. Good job Alfonso.

Joaquin Davalos